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And for the record, I would prefer a REVIEW (even a critique) over a "favorite".
Just a little poem I'm planning to submit to a contest...Don't know if I should though, I'm not that good at poetry. Thoughts? I'd love some critique on this.
Just a little poem I'm planning to submit to a contest...Don't know if I should though, I'm not that good at poetry. Thoughts? I'd love some critique on this.
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I like it. It's very dark and foreboding, something that a lot of poetry these days is lacking, so it's refreshing to see that there is still some left. I think you should enter it.